The tavern crouched, low and dark,
against the constant chill
of ocean's breath.
Deep brown planking,
black ironwork,
obscure golden ale windows
defying wind and surf -
curled like a grouchy grizzly
on a massive bed
of succulent iceplant.
Smelling within of old wood,
whispered echoes of last night’s diners,
aged ciders and fireplace smoke.
We approached the empty bar,
a man trailing a little girl.
“A pint of your homemade bleu, please.”
Gently carried to car
what resembled a large soda
with a lid.
Carefully cradled
for the hour drive home.
Shiny surface just covers chunks
reminiscent of exotic marble,
seamed with blue, aqua, green-gray.
Salty, savory, pungent,
dirty sock meets divine in
thick, creamy sensory
mink
sliding, crumbling
one unspeakable dram
at a time
thrilling tongue,
untwining into nostrils,
tickling deepest reach of ear,
sensuously enrapturing
palate, throat,
stalling swallow,
leaving stomach
to lament
its lack of taste buds!
Author notes
dram: about 3.7 ml, or a very scant teaspoon
Prompt: Cheese
In a list
A contest entry
- Cheeses!!! #140 For Allpoetry held by Winklings with joy! by Lyndon.
1750 points, ended November 6, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Your descriptive imagery is breathtaking! What an atmosphere you've built. I'm impressed, very, very impressed. Yeah.
Peace Georgia

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This is such an imaginative interpretation of the prompt. Very well done.




