There once was a man called Bill
And he enjoyed to kill
He'll stab you in the back
Then hide you in a sack
Cant you see his grin
While hes rubbing his greasy chin
He will stuff you in his van
Hes smooth like Jackie-Chan
You get to his house
But he'll kill you like a mouse
So you better say your prayers
Because Bill is just a giant hater!
A contest entry
- Silly, Silly, Silly by misterfish.
950 points, ended July 5, 27 entries
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Comments
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Really really good! Thanks for entering
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"He will stuff you in his van
Hes smooth like Jackie-Chan."
HAHAHA this was brilliant, and those lines especially made me laugh my butt off! Brava!
L.
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Funny last line
Actually, the whole piece amused me.
How about a change to the last line as:
"When Bill gets you in his stare" ?
Just a thought for suggestion to tie up the end of this
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Tres bien!
This poem is so adorable! I love the ryhme scheme and the subject. Oh how I hope Bill doesn't come for me, I'd rather be lost at sea...^_^ Sorry, got a little carried away.
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