fear, like the feeling of the heart in your chest stopping on a dime
like the need to scream getting choked in your throat until you cant breath
the need to claw out your eyes to make the images stop
the wish of death so your soul can stop crying
but the soul never stops crying, or screaming
for true fear is not just in your mind, but a part of you
Author notes
what is fear 2 u
A contest entry
- Big Emotion... by Walking Oxymoron.
550 points, ended November 22, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Thoughts & Emotions by albinoblacksheep720.
700 points, ended November 27, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Nice
Short, sweet, and to the point. I love that kind of style. I like the flow and emotion in it. Fear is death taking most of the time. Nice job. Good luck -
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thank you
im glad u liked it, thanks for the comment
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wow, this is really powerful, it makes me think of my biggest fear as i read it, wonderful write, best of luck in the contest
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thank you
i love to hear what others think of my work, thank you for the compliment
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WoW
It's deep... and a little bit frightening. Great job!!
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Loving the last line!!
What a clincher, makes you think.
Maybe you should enter again, on different emotions. I reckon you could blow me away.
Fear is indeed a part of you. You end up being scared of fear itself.
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