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Numb

I am lost
unable to be found
Who will speak the truth to me
now that she is bound

She hurts
I bleed
The pain inside hurts far more
than the cuts received

Her low
my sadness
where are you when I need you
to save me from the madness

Alone

am I

life is cold

my soul has died


Author notes

My mother was in a critical motorcycle accident Oct. 12th 2008, a day before her birthday....she is my everything. Without her I am lost, I am nothing.

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  • Lil-Miss-Invisible
    December 13, 2008

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    I know how this feels, i feel it often, tho i have quit cutting, (or at least my best). i handle physical pain way better than emotional, but its better to talk about it.... sorry that this sounds kinda whatever *idk the word at the moment* this poem is absolutely wonderful, full of emotions.


  • afroqban
    November 3, 2008

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    DAYUM ma! this is such a beautifully sad piece and have scribed. omg are u really this sad? so talented, so amazing, i wish u didnt have to know so pain and become numb. i love ur writing so much, and ill say it again, ur writing has grew so much, its so different from the early stuff. see how u grow, ur heart grows too ma. much love