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Really ?

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Are the facts hidden the in webs we weave,
sheerly by design
Is it the truth we really seek,
while reading between the lines

Is anything what it appears,
or is it all just some ones lies
Can we really think outside the box,
you might be quite surprised

They stand right there and look at you,
stare you in the face
Their words come out a jumbled mess,
of untruths and pure disgrace

Can they not yet tell the truth,
is it buried there so deep
As the lies roll from their tongues so barbed
the words fall in a heap

Soon it will be liars day,
and we should all go out and vote
The new president should be “Charlie Brown”,
he’s the only one to quote


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picture prompt #3 no credit given not my own

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  • Amera gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    This is a terriffic take on the picture prompt, it's original and well thought out. I agree with your choice of the new president.

    Love,
    Amera


  • Alyzeh
    November 12, 2008
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    I saw this contest, and I found the pictures to be so beautiful, I couldn't come up with anything but I just had to go through all the entries.So here I am, reading yours, and I must say, you have raised some very good questions! Excellent write! Good luck in the contest!

  • mz.butter
    November 6, 2008
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    very good write

    trust yourself and believe your decisions are what's best for you.


  • chilali
    November 5, 2008

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    I love your take on the prompt. Excellent! Good luck in the contest


  • x-dont -ask-me-x
    November 4, 2008

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    I love this peom expecailty the webs we weave. awsome write. and yes Charlie Brown would be the best president ever!


  • FlamesDragoness
    November 3, 2008
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    'switch it around...are the facts hidden
    in the webs we weave....sheerly by
    design.

    (helps the
    flow..)

    and I do agree...my TRUE JOY of
    Late in this great political debate...
    is the "MUTE" Button!

    plus-I already voted...and what
    a pleasurable banquet that was!

    well done, we so agree,
    thankgoodness....we can end
    this political madness, and
    get back to business!


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