its your Birthday?
woo! yay?
Twenty now, huh?
that sounds kinda great
I wish I was twenty, or 1 less then twenty at the least
but you know, such sucks to observe the hormone feast
ew, that sounds like feeding maggots
and my forcing rhymes make this poem a faggot
Fashion-Birthday-Fashion-Birthday
BAM, its a girthy birthday
filling in the years with a disturbing memory
it sucks cause you'll get too much hair
I remember getting too much hair
damn adolesence, damn it and such
dont you just want to kicked you vanity in the crotch?
like those disturbs irate people with not a care in their hair
bad music choices and bitchyness is their flair
you want something to capture you eye?
then watch a Japanese game show with someone screaming "You want prize?!"
if you want to feel young, than try Jewish cooking
it looks like youve minced up a criminial witness looking
I mean all young people food looks like chewed up beef
mixed with flour and spiced with seeds
But it tastes ok, and ok is all it needs.
weeeee!
Happy happy Birthdee
hope it doesnt suck and you get more than a chance to fuck =D
A contest entry
- It's my birthday by alexandrathegreat.
700 points, ended December 13, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wooo! 3 claps 4 bringing memorier back to me
Um interesting, very good! Still not a life you would want to carry out in the future im sure make you birthday memriable by keeping your mates close and enemies closer!
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(this is peris they wouldn't let me give you more applause)
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OH OH! I forgot...
Good luck in the contest!
Damn how dare I forget that.
Lack of manners!
^_^
-gives you more applause-
Forgive me?! -
Hmmmm...
For some odd reson Im in love with this.
It's random yet poetic...
Maybe I'm just weird.
Maybe I'm just going insane.
Oh what's that?
Julie just felt a spark of inspiration hit her upon the head.
Yes I think so.
Pay no mind to this comment...or at least the last part.
Love and Hugs,
Peris <3
(I swear my name's not julie...shhhh)
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LoL I love Japanese game show and this poem raised my eyebrows and made me exicited to turn another damned year by. Thank you and no it did not suck.
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