Hearts are held in open hands
given up with a hopeful prayer,
and in this crowd the hurt boy stands
hiding the grief he cannot bear.
And in his cold and desperate tears,
he's crying out for what he craves -
it heals the hurt from all the years,
an eternal love that always saves.
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it totally rocks sissa!!!!!!!! are you speaking of someone i may know? please tell me! its very good. no grammer mistakes. it ryhmes which takes mad skill awsome and it flows nicely ...bravo!!!!!!
jess
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