Whether wantonly so
or with spontaneity,
I will never freely
leave you behind.
I would never renounce
or relinquish my claim
to your love.
I give myself to you
without restraints.
You are my other half.
Author notes
Abandon 1. to leave completely 2. to give up
Abandon (n.) 1 Unbounded enthusiasm; exuberance. 2 A complete surrender of inhibitions.
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a Poem in 10 LINES or less (A) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended November 28, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Abandonment of the heart and soul is a remarkable thing. Such a true gift of unconditional love. Your sentiments shine here. Lovely job of it but I do feel the last line took some power out of the piece. Hmm, maybe a rewording? I don't know but it seemed the strength plummented there. Either way it is a really good piece.
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Very beautiful and simple.
Realy lovely.
Good luck in the contest!
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Very deep.
Written as if it's a vow.
I like how it's on the other end of the definition,
staying rather than leaving. Great choice of words
as well. G'luck in the contest
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