A face.
Unknowingly her story's already written.
A smile.
Lips that will touch her child's cheek.
Her eyes.
One for seeing hurt, the other for seeing healing.
Her nose.
Unable to graze the cheek of her true love.
A hand.
Helping those hurting themselves.
A breath.
Words to a friend in dire need of reassurance.
Her future.
Destined for hurt, because all she can give is love.
Her life.
Given to others because of her nature.
A child.
Unable to know, unable to see, but willing to go into the darkness.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Riftkin.
700 points, ended November 7, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Very impressive write. Great emotion and original concept. Nice job! Blessings. :-)
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Thank you for your thoughts on the child in the picture.
Your words are how you see her and I am glad to have
read this poem from you.
Riftkin

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awesome
Hello Katrina, would you believe it, your name is the same as my sisters,and even spelt the same way 
Sweet heart, you have penned here a wonderful poem, your last lined really stuck out the most to me, your words, so true.
I wish you all the best in the contest, and you have been a realure to read.
Much love to you my friend.
~Angel-anne~

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Love it. good luck in the contest




