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A child

A face.
Unknowingly her story's already written.
A smile.
Lips that will touch her child's cheek.
Her eyes.
One for seeing hurt, the other for seeing healing.
Her nose.
Unable to graze the cheek of her true love.
A hand.
Helping those hurting themselves.
A breath.
Words to a friend in dire need of reassurance.
Her future.
Destined for hurt, because all she can give is love.
Her life.
Given to others because of her nature.
A child.
Unable to know, unable to see, but willing to go into the darkness.

A contest entry

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  • worshipchick
    December 10, 2008
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    Very impressive write. Great emotion and original concept. Nice job! Blessings. :-)


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    Thank you for your thoughts on the child in the picture.
    Your words are how you see her and I am glad to have
    read this poem from you.

    Riftkin


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    awesome

    Hello Katrina, would you believe it, your name is the same as my sisters,and even spelt the same way
    Sweet heart, you have penned here a wonderful poem, your last lined really stuck out the most to me, your words, so true.
    I wish you all the best in the contest, and you have been a realure to read.
    Much love to you my friend.
    ~Angel-anne~


  • RareFlower
    November 4, 2008
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    Love it. good luck in the contest