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burning sun

red gold
where the negros bow
ice them down
work hard
need no white man
to work here

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i was thinking 19th century

A contest entry

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  • The Cube
    November 5, 2008

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    A more historic approach to the contest prompt. In some ways I expected a piece like this, but at the same time I didn't. Short, but definately gives a good thought to the reader.