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Go down
There's a way
Your path is chosen

First step
May seem hard
Harm will not come

Long bath
Stone cold tub
The brink of death

Get dry
Much later on
You'll not catch cold

Author notes

Chapter 2.

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  • Bob Fox
    November 3, 2008

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    I hope

    I hope the warmth of the poets words can relieve the chill from the cold tub. Life does have it's temperature changes.


    • Missing Carolina
      November 3, 2008

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      I'll give you a sneak preview--the relief from the cold tub comes in the laundry, in prose, between Chapter 3 and Chapter 4--or you can follow the link on my page, and read it yourself! :-)