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Zorro

O! Whisk me off to where you hide,
My dark, defiant, bandit love!
Perhaps, once there, you will confide
Who waits beneath the hat, the glove?
Who's is the face beneath the mask?
Is it as sweet as I surmise?
What is your name? Or dare I ask
Who waits beneath the dark disguise!?

Author notes

This was written June 26th '08

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    This is such a great rhyme here, who is that masked man and what is under that cape Well thought out piece. Best to you fine Bandit


  • Room without doors gold member
    November 4, 2008

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    Outstanding

    Zorro is one of those characters who remains slightly enigmatic and therefore all the more fasinating. I thought this poem was excellent with faultless rhyme and flow. Thank you for posting.