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Awake before Sun.


Red band of dawn break
Imprisoning tree silhouettes.
Paused still in autumn chill
Speaking in bloody vibrance,
Forever in your youth.

I wish more moments to be ripe as you.
Humble in your beauty,
My red ocean of morning.
You are the grand entrance of Sun
To an audience of early birds.

Author notes

written at about 6-7 AM watching the sun rise

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