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true friends

you could say a true friend is a true friend but you never really know until you see with your own eyes bout how much they love and care about you then you could say that that is a true friend

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  • Lightningpaladin
    November 5, 2008
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    i live the message of this poem. good job.


  • movedon
    November 4, 2008
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    i liked the topic..and i agree with the last comment. why such a sad BG with such an uplifting poem? I liked your poem, but didnt like the long sentenced style. idk just me. and maybe fix the contrast of the BG and font color. it just doesnt work and your eyes have to strain to read the words. Otherwise, awesome!

    ing with daggers,
    Mylee


  • raspberry Greeters member
    November 4, 2008

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    true friends.. good topic.. but why so dark. your font colors almost hit the background and not easy to read.. well, make it a point to make the fonts more legible..