love

love week at the knees
love can't live without them
love sad when there away
love want every day
love mind a flutter
love thoughts all jumbled
love confused
love footprints on your heart
love promises never broken
love can't live with it can't live without it
love deep inside is where you can always find it
love the misused word
love what people get stuck in
love what most people eventually feel
love what i feel

do you love someone?

A contest entry

Thoughts & Emotions by albinoblacksheep720. 700 points, ended November 27, 2008, 42 entries
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albinoblacksheep720
November 11, 2008

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Good job. You used a bit of personification with this. It's good, but I think it could be stronger. Good luck
StickyNote5
November 4, 2008

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wow
i really liked this poem. i just expected you to explain love but then u said 'love what i feel' omg. I LOVED this poem.
LannieM
November 3, 2008

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I like the meaning but there's one line :
"love sad when there away"
and in my mind the "there" should be spelled they're. I don't know if I just misunderstood? But that's just my opinion.