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Fall Song

Something that makes me sigh,
smiling, reveling
in blissful observation of the turning world
and of longer and earlier nights
Star-laden skies,
laced by a fire's smoke
awakening something deep inside
stirring, like music,
This autumn-song.

A contest entry

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  • Samplette gold member
    November 4, 2008
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    A lovely piece of poetry. Very nicely crafted. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam