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Good thing Birds have Feathers

Need warmer clothes on,
Outside it's cold,
Vengence upon the weather behold,
Everyone looks forward to,
Mighty bangs and booms,
Brilliant colours, they whizz and they zoom,
Each leaf that falls to the worn street,
Reaches the ground, a coloured carpet at my feet.

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  • Legend silver member
    November 9, 2008

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    What a glorious image you painted I love the sight of the sky lit bay the wonderful colours that fireworks display Set to the background of autumns carpet of interwoven colours Wonderful Good luck in the contest


  • Barbara gold member
    November 3, 2008
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    I was attacked by falling leaves today when the wind decided to hurl them in my direction. A cold, strong wind. 'Vengence upon the weather' is right! A very apt and nicely written description of November.

    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.