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Oasis

Bubbling white foam
cascading down mystical sculptures,

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as soothing ripples splash
into shimmering hues
of aqua-marine,

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absorbed into tranquil serenity.














Author notes

Picture Inspired "waterfalls" by H.P. Kolb
20 words or less~

A contest entry

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    wonderful imagery
    you painted a gorgeous picture with your words


  • Samplette gold member
    November 4, 2008

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    Very beautiful and inviting words. I enjoyed it. Thank you for entering the contest. Nice work.
    Sam