Here we go again.
You ask me for one more round,
and I drink another round down.
It's the same always is.
You and me once again.
The beer in my hand
begs me for a dreamless sleeps.
There's no nightmares
in a drunken haze.
You pull at my hand
and that's another one gone.
There's a cig at my lips
telling you to try a little harder
for my attention.
Two more shots,
and you gonna be
in my dreams tonight.
Three more
and the dreams will die.
Tonights not your night.
Maybe try tomorrow night instead.
Yeah, here I go again.
One more round,
and then I might go home
with you.
Author notes
this was just a fun write... it ain't one of my best but it shows another side of me.... lolz...^_V
A contest entry
- Intoxicated by Hell In Harmony.
3500 points, ended November 18, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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very good poem and it does show a different side of you
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yeah... it does doesnt it
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It's the same always is.
You and me once again.
The beer in my hand
begs me for a dreamless sleeps.
There's no nightmares
in a drunken haze.
good flow here.
There's a cig at my lips
telling you to try a little harder
for my attention.
Two more shots,
and you gonna be
in my dreams tonight.
Three more
and the dreams will die.
Tonights not your night.
I thought that would have made a better ending.
not bad at alll
goodluck&&thank
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thanks
and i see what you mean... that would have been a better ending... but what is already written is all ready put down... oh well
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