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~emily smith~

Emily Smith is up under,
under your bed forever she will be,
don't be scared she will just make you bleed!!!

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  • XSuicidalXWolfX
    November 5, 2008
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    Okay

    Good poem,
    More could be added to make a great! piece of writing,


  • movedon
    November 4, 2008

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    my first name is emily so of course i clicked on it. i like it short. the thouht of someone under my bed scares the crap outta me as is. dont change it, i love it!

    ing aiwht daggers,
    Mylee


  • parachute fog
    November 4, 2008

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    fix the colour contast in the background with the writing, to read i had to highlight the wording.

    very ridiculous and unpraise worthy, but you just started and hey, perhaps this is a joke.


  • xXemo-teddybearXx
    November 3, 2008

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    and...................weree is the rest of it
    i think it can be good
    just ummmm maybe add alot more

  • i love pain
    November 3, 2008
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    my poem is awsome!!!!!!!!

    my poem is soooooo awsome!!!!!!

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