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rivers

the calming sound of the water
rushing over the shining pebles
rushing downstream
the soft sound filling your ears
your cares go away
the water crystal clear
fish peacefully swiming below
there cares all away
nothing to worry about
their beautiful colours
orange red yellow
turing the water into a rainbow

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  • condor gold member
    January 10

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    I really love this piece. There is nothing more calming than sitting by a river bank watching nature play. You certainly have this down pat. Just perfect.