One glimpse equals dismissal
her vibrance has been evacuated
whilst the soul hides undercover.
His slurs bounce around,
seemingly helpless against the wall;
he cant hurt her anymore.
Author notes
prompt: Behind Dull Blue Eyes
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 15 entries less then 100 words #30 by mysticstorm.
650 points, ended November 7, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please be critically honest :)
Comments
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Deeply touching and heart felt...such sad reality of life, but if one can get the strenght to leave it is a wonderful day, but if their eyes turn dull for death it is a very sad day...nicely done with meaning...
thank you for entering.
mystic
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