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Hole In The Earth

There is a hole in the earth
and its calling my name
never letting go
Strangling my hold on reality

If only I could close my eyes
and fill that hole
That emptiness that invades your wounds
The stinging nettle that leaves marks

Lock the door
Throw away a key
Keep the hole in the earth at bay.
We might stand a chance

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  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    November 3, 2008
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    Tell you what??
    That this poem is too good and too sad to be allowed??
    :-<