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Illegal Love Contraband

Illegal Love Contraband

By: Mrs. Lady Enthralling

 

In the name of nakedness ,

I am here in the sweat of my speed racing pulse,

to take you in my arms and take away all

the ancient heart breaks that still

 lay beneath immortal stars.

The sun will rise in the morning

and you will awake to a matrimony

of petals and oil making memories

 of us being in love .

 

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number Txu 1 - 259- 764, All rights reserved

Author notes

Illegal Love Contraband

all i could force out
writers block
its such a bad case.

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 18, 2008

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    "In the name of nakedness!" YES!
    LOL! Lovely work here honey.
    It's great to read you here again!
    I hope that you are well and congrats
    to you on your Silver! Keep it up!




    Jeremy0826


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    November 6, 2008

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    Writers block huh Damn! if this is writers block I want some. Nice write !
    Good Luck In the contest

    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      November 6, 2008
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      thank you hon i love the picture and tried forcing out a melody that would be perfect crap my thoughts crashed thanks and good luck judging

  • SilentMoonlight
    November 3, 2008

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    For writers block I think you wrote this with a great flow and original scent in it. This had so much subtle passion in it as well as falling water of sensualism it rang with an innocent sound.

    Lovely write!


  • faderman1959
    November 3, 2008

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    What writers block? This is one of the best I have ever read from you! It is absolutely stunning with its romantic passion! Great write!

    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      November 3, 2008
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      i so love you dude why thank you hon it will be a miracle if i get any trophy he wanted not over 40 hell do i have 10 lines thanks fader

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