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He Is Perfectly Perfect

This guy I love
Is absolutely amazing.
I could ask for more things,
But right now, he's really all I need.

He looks like the one to complete me,
With his blond hair, blue eyes
And dazzling smile.
He's absolutely wonderful!

His personality is even better.
He's quiet and shy around me,
But with his friends,
He laughs and jokes around.

He is oh so kind to most people,
And he is an amazing person.
He sweeps me off my feet
And fills me with happiness.

This guy was once a dream,
Then he entered my life
And captured my heart.
He seems to be fading into a dream again.

I still see him around
And he's still my knight in shining armour
Riding a brilliantly white stallion.
But sometimes I wish....

 

He would sweep me off my feet again,

Take me in his arms and never let go.

I wish he would bend down

And kiss me softly.

 

I wish he would love me again,

And I want to be with him forever.

I love this guy to death

For he is perfectly perfect. 

Author notes

I hope this is good enough. This guy truly is the perfect one for me... If he isn't, I haven't met one to top him, so at the moment he's perfect. I hope we can get back together again... The reason we broke up is not something I feel like explaining at the moment, but he's still perfect to me, and I love him.

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  • Frodofan silver member
    November 17, 2008

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    Well, it's not exactly putting him on a golden pedestal. It is and it isn't which is kind of interesting I guess. I feel like his flaws are shining through in this one. If he was perfect, I think he'd still be with you.

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