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Autumn
bones of an old man
blend in
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Strange how old bones kind of match branches etc when there aren't any leaves. I guess we shed it all at some point.... and become one with a single source.... nature.
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i see this as the bare limbs and thin limbs...a comparison in juxtaposition...PK
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This can be said of many things and that is the magic of this haiku there are many things that blend in and that is what I was nmade to think of as i read this
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Yes... you read it well.... thanks so much for coming by.
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this struck a chord and reminded me of a haiku I wrote a few months ago about a remote island I went to by boat where the tress were leafless and white as bones...like you said becoming one again with their source--
desolate island--
dying trees
reach up to heaven
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Hey Suzi.... thanks for sharing.. and commenting.
desolate/dying trees/reach to heaven. Solid image....
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