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[ The good lord's canvas here on earth. ]

The good lord's canvas here on earth.
for the pain inside of me, let's me
know I am alive.

The new life coming into our
family in February, for this
makes me a grandmother.

Joy I occasionally feel.  This
is from the inside and
sometimes I let show on
the outside.

A contest entry

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  • Riftkin gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    Any time we can be thankful for even one thing is a beautiful time of the year.

    Thank you for entering my contest.

    Riftkin


    • pain in colorado
      November 4, 2008

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      Thank you, I appreciate the comments. i am so new to this and still have a time understanding what someone wants in the poems that get submitted.


      • Riftkin gold member
        November 4, 2008
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        For this one.. I wished I could have given gold to all, for to me, if you are thankful, it deserves gold.