My love,
My one and only,
Your love is but my light,
It's the sun of all my mornings,
It's the fire of my nights,
It's love my heart longs to have.
Our two hearts become one.
Our love bears all things,
Believes all things,
Hopes all things,
And endures all things,
And will,
Always and forever.
We were two,
And had but one heart,
Our hearts combined in love,
Together,
We dream,
Together,
We cherish,
Together,
We enjoy,
Together,
We love,
Together,
We share,
Together,
We believe,
Together,
We remember our special memories,
Create our story,
And spend eternity with each other,
Always and forever,
My love.
Author notes
This is part of my poem "A Never Ending Love." If you read this poem, please, please check out "A Never Ending Love" to receive the full story this poem creates. Thank you.
A contest entry
- ~*~Love Without End~*~ by Trisha W.
700 points, ended November 3, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a beautiful and very obviously heartfelt tribute to love.
It reads almost as a prayer, a mantra to a higher state which has brought you to a place of total joy and happiness.
The first two stanzas are universal, the final one more personal - "We remember our special memories, create our story".
The third stanza felt a bit repetive at first read, but on re-reading, it carried a wedding-vow-like emotion, which fit perfectly with the devotional theme which permeated the whole write.
A touching 'always and forever' tribute to your true love.
PJ
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lovely write...
that expresses the devotion of 2...thank u for entering and good luck!
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