hard to breathe when you on top of me
takes the air from my lungs
but you're all I need
that kiss was heavy, alcoholic
vision swimming and skin shivering
happens so quick
my face, at your will
reflected in your brown eyes
for you I'd die, I'd kill
head spun, headstruck
thoughts focused only on you
self-control? good luck
you, always my addiction
I get high off your body
what a beautiful affliction
Author notes
for Rudy...r.i.p. babes...you were my favorite drug
A contest entry
- Intoxicated by Hell In Harmony.
3500 points, ended November 18, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hard to breathe when you on top of me
you should be you're
that kiss was heavy, alcoholic
vision swimming and skin shivering
vivid.
head spun, headstruck
thoughts focused only on you
self-control? good luck
sadly. enough.
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goodluck and thank -
Beautiful passionate write. I like the way you described the kiss in the second stanza. It seemed metaphorical in a sense, like love being addicting. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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hell yeah hun, love is addicting! Like I said, my man was always my favorite drug. Sometimes love or lust or sex just gets you high!
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wow great poem, i like your take on this, best of luck in the contest
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