who would have thought
a girl like me,
wishes to waste a way
all hallows eve?
im quiet and shy,
romantic too
and yet all i could think about
was a six pack or two.
i've never been drunk
never had the urge
and yet that night
i wanted to do somethin ubsurd.
Alcholics run in my family
so drinkings practicall a sin.
but with everything to messed up
my friends fighting again, that sin didnt matter then.
so i grabbed that bottle
and thought no more
intoxicated defiantly
need i say more?
Author notes
i have never been drunk in my life before that night. everthing got so messed up and i wanted the release that being drunk would bring. after that first beer, well i really dont remeber anything after it.
A contest entry
- Intoxicated by Hell In Harmony.
3500 points, ended November 18, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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It's Okay
Oh, really? Where did you get drunk at? I didn't know...
It's good. -
im quiet and shy,
romantic too
and yet all i could think about
was a six pack or two.
aw. sad. true story?
i've never been drunk
never had the urge
and yet that night
i wanted to do somethin -ubsurd. -
"absurd"
-practicall -
"practically"
not bad.goodluck&thank
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unfortunatly it is true
thanks for showing me my mistakes i cant spell to save my life. lol
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