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Necro Time

Needless to say it's my time of year
Every October, October my dear
Creatures of night ravage the streets
Reckless collection of ravenous freaks
Offer distraction and focus away
Time for my baby, my lovely display
I dress in my ribbons and heels and red lips
My lovely black dress, so shapely my hips
Every October, just like before
Baby I'm coming, coming for more
Away in the crypt, they claim it's a sin

But what is my fault? Me loving him

You all can judge but I'll never care; After all it's no sin, it' s only fair

 

Necro Time Baby

                I'll choose my next heart

   I don't want it beating

                          I want him apart

 

Necro Time Baby 

               Each year the same

  Go to the grave yard

           A new lover claimed

Author notes

lol =) #1 Necrophilism, perfect crime to commit

Acroustic for Necro Time Baby =) lol

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    November 9, 2008
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    LMAO...what a crime...

    Very good stuff here..

    XXJeannette

  • Warrior7
    November 8, 2008
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    oh this was very, very good, loads of imagery. Loved it


  • countrybabe gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    Excellent

    This is an excellent piece of writing. I liked this. Well done and good luck in the contest.

    Countrybabe


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    November 5, 2008
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    LOL now this was interesting
    great work thanks for writing!
    best of luck

    Tasha


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    November 3, 2008

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    Sounds like you're having a party, are we all invited We could each bring our own cadaver heart and share a drink or two. The cops would be non the wiser.

    Ahh, yes, the perfect crime. What's a few heartless dead bodies more or less.

    Good work and I wish you best of luck in the contest


  • catz Moderators member
    November 3, 2008

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    Ouch!!... oh wait... dead people don't feel pain. Too bad, though, pain is beautiful isn't it, especially when inflicted on someone else

    Good poem for Halloween, Katie. Good luck in the contest

    Dee

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