Perfect love that suffuses my soul
Let me kneel and worship
Spirit speaks to spirit in natures pureness
Ethereal energies dance around my head
I touch
I see
I hear
I feel
Intoxicating love
For my poverty is a gift not to be judged
The world lacks the humility to see beyond itself
If only -----
If only love with treasures rich in nature's grasp could speak to mankind
what peace we would afford
The gift to be found in every heart
In a list
A contest entry
- Words Of Wisdom By Contemporary Spiritual Teachers : Jeannie Zandi by maa.
777 points, ended November 16, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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You have revealed the magnificent gift of all life, which most people do not believe exists, not having looked for it. Your verse is calming and lovely.
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I feel that your words spring from an innocent heart that has kept the river of purity flowing ... while reading them, my mind was completely still, like when being stricken by awe ... even now, there is an atmosphere of peace and sacredness reigning in this room, in this heart ...
the voice in your poem sounds like a gentle whisper, inviting us to be silent and listen ...
there is something angelic about your verse, it touches me in a very special way, but does not leave any mortal footprints on the path it took to meet me ... crystalline grace caressing my soul ...
thank you,
maa
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Nice flow and a humbleness to know
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good write
that's some line
'If only love with treasures rich in natures grasp could speak to mankind'
good job once more.
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