My heart is broken, beaten to the ground;
I have no one to hold when your not around.
I wish I could see your face again,
See your beautiful smile before this all began.
We just met, but I don't care,
I've never felt this way before; its not fair.
Not speaking is like having no air,
I keep trying to breath but you....don't want to share.
When I found out you liked me
I knew it was never meant to be.
You're beautiful, sweet, smart, and perfect in every way,
And yet my hearts still broken for one more day.
A contest entry
- ~*~Love Without End~*~ by Trisha W.
700 points, ended November 3, 2008, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'm gunna give you points for your poems! by SmartBrick.
400 points, ended November 30, 2008, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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That was great! I love the ryhme!
Thanks for entering! -
Amazing write.. congrats on first place, you earned it
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did i mention...
AMAZING..lovely write and deep...i totally know where ur coming from..guess we all gotta go thru that pain sometime right? a few spelling errors but u followed the rulez and i just love this write too much...totally moving and ppl can relate..def goin' to the top..thanx for sharing and good luck!!!
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