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Passion

Heat, pain, pleasure, and lust
Makes humans feel like they're going to bust.
Touch their hearts and leave them breathless,
This is my joy, not a weakness.
I found him, I found him!!
The one who's meant to be the eternal victim
Of my love's eternity.
Never, never will I let go
For his heart and mine, each other we own.
I love thee, like the angels love Him,
But we are not meant for heaven.
Vampires never go to heaven for what they do,
But we shall see what OUR love can do.

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  • Wolven Roses
    November 20, 2008
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    A very very nice poem. good rhymes, they didnt feel pushed. i like hte vampire part at the end.XD