Winter's season beckons now,
as Autumn slips away.
The gold's and red's of falling leaves,
are left in yesterday.
Grey skies overshadow blue,
the earth prepares to sleep.
While memories of the year gone by,
in silent thoughts we keep.
North wind, strong and mighty,
comes a rattling round your door.
Jack Frost's icy fingers,
decorate the ground once more.
Hedgerows sleeping silently,
Give shelter from the night.
To all that frolicked in the dawn,
of Summers early light.
So, another year is ending,
as the moments slip from view.
We'll await the birth of Springtime,
To rejoice in all things new.
A contest entry
- WINTER by Rhythm Child.
400 points, ended January 11, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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As it is 0 degrees F. here (or -18 C.) this poem really fits! Even as bright and sunny and pretty as it is, sooooo cold! I keep reminding myself that Spring always comes... Thanks for the lovely write!


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Very beautiful.
A wonderful write as always, I have to agree with John on the lovely gentle flow of this poem.
Well done.

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This was really beautiful.


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Many thanks from my page to yours...mal
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Awesome!!!
How did I miss this shining gem?!!?
Thank you for sharing the beautiful splendor of the seasons in your bright and happy world with all of us!!!
Peace always, xx Cyn xx


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Thanks Cyn, Hope it snows Christmas day.. Peace Always right back at ya..Mal..

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lovely poem about winter Mal
brrrrrrrrrrrr role on springtime
ive got me thermals ready
June


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Keep them thermals pulled round tight June..I hear tell it's going to be a good one..Love mal
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Brrrrrrrrrrrr i will me friend lol lol lol
June
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The seasons, they are a changing...!
beautifully written...the cycles of life...what goes round must surely come back around...life and death and death and life...it's all a giant wheel...
you have represented this in such a gentle flowing way
Thanks for sharing your words
John


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Al life is a circle John isn't it. There is an old saying, "What goes around comes around",true of just about everything....Always nice to have you stop by ...mal
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What imagery!
and as Mother Nature gets out her blanket of white may you stay warm. Your descriptive poem was a pleasure to read and written in nice style and form. j
y


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Thank you Joy, Don't forget those thermals LOL...mal
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Very timely (and well-written) reminder of the season about to descend on us---brrr!
Your cold friend,
Bill

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Winter is beautiful! as long as I can view it's icy beauty wrapped in my fleece and fuzzy house shoes while gazing out the window. This is a beautiful tribute to Jack Frost and I love the rhyme.


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Thank you Malmadre, Always nice to here from you. Must say I love your Avatar.. I feel like that sometimes....mal
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Brrrrrrrr Mal its bad enough this icy weather with out you adding to it with your wonderful poem Please please write a summer one.these old bones hate the cold and damp
Excellent

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Long Johns my dear friend,that'll do the trick..Lol...Bless you as always for such cheery comments...Mal
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