We sat in the corner booth
away from sun-glaring windows
Both needing clear focus
to outface the other
with jealousy attempts
She knows rich men
I know aspiring models
Our stares clashed
like viking swords
and words tobogganed
down steep landfill mounds
A fun ride of wooing digress
A contest entry
- ~*~Love Without End~*~ by Trisha W.
700 points, ended November 3, 2008, 21 entries
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She knows rich men
I know aspiring models
i get that. its like a secret war u have with ex gf's or bf's. -
WOW
THis is like a my horse is bigger than urs!
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wooing digress ... hmmm... i like that ... restaurants are no good at bad relationships ... trust me you... another good one . good luck in the contest!!!
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Love the lines...
"Our stares clashed
like viking swords"
What a wonderful description..and gives a clear image to those looks !!!
A clever write..well done.
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lovely write...
nice piece..touching 2 and great flow..thank you for sharing and good luck!
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