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Northern Star

I have learnt my lesson well
The truth is out there I can tell
Don't look back and don't give in to their lies
And goodbyes, Northern Star.

They buy your dreams so they can sell your soul
Is it any wonder we've lost control?
Feelings come, feelings go

Live your life without regret
Don't be someone who they forget
When you're lost reach out for me and you'll see
She's not far, Northern Star.

Spiral up in a whirlwind,
Shining bright in the sky.
Don't worry, I'm here by your side.
Don't give up, don't say goodbye.

I loved him and he loved me.
But we're now history.
But who knows how the tale will end?
That is a secret, my friend.

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  • Elizabeth-falcon
    December 5, 2008
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    it's great

    It's a lovely poem. Good work!


  • Wolven Roses
    November 4, 2008

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    very nice poem. written well, but not quite the emotion i was looking for. still, its very nice. thank you.