I've cried every drop of tear i could cry,
i can't get over you, i can't bear to try.
I'd always thought of giving up, i still think of it now,
but even if i wanted to, i don't know how.
I'm always thinking of you, all the time.
Whenever i'm lost in thought, you're the first one i find.
I smile when i see your face,
i cry when i'm reminded of my place.
I know its impossible between us,
since we don't even have that simple trust.
We're just acquantances, so why do i love you so much?
The answers are far away, in a place i can barely touch.
I've never experienced such extreme mood swings,
since i've met you i've learnt all sorts of things.
But i guess we can only be friends,
still, my love for you won't end.
I can tell i love you a lot.
such love can't be easily stopped.
So, for now, i'll just tell you this:
words can't describe how much my love for you is.
Author notes
Eternal Pain
A contest entry
- "Prewrites " + Plus by wingsofgold25.
600 points, ended November 20, 2008, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - and This is Unrequited by YourTruestIntention.
625 points, ended December 18, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Endeavers of the Heart by J Kard.
650 points, ended December 9, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Heartfelt rhymes by ItsUrHomeboy.
400 points, ended December 22, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
1 - 18 of 18
-
Thanks
-
I like this, its a very good work that I can easily relate to. Im always trying to find the right words, because 'I love you' just doesnt seem enough. Good luck in the contest
-
Thanks
-
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
-
Thank you
-
Wow, this is such an amazing poem! you described how we cant resist our feelings even if we know we cant have more...in the most perfect way I love it! it's like there is music in it...great job!
-
Thanks
-
Reminds me sooo much of the situation I was in around this time last year. God, it hurt so bad I was so miserable. Nicely wrote though, very expressive and always here to talk if you need someone as I know how it is.
-
Thanks sis, glad you enjoyed it
-
You have a beautiful melody in your poem. It seems that you did care about this person. That is amazing, and the way you wrote this is a haunting vision of you love. I enjoyed this greatly!
-
Thanks for your comment
-
Uhhhhmm…
This was no different ! Your poems are beautiful!
You are talented,
I loved this poem ! loved the whole thing!
Keep up the good Writing!
Shuberth
-
Thanks
-
awww this poem is amazing .....i love love love it:]
another one of those poems that blew me off my feet
very well done..
love katelynn
-
Thanks
-
This is very well written. I know exactly how it feels to feel like this:
I've never experienced such extreme mood swings,
since i've met you i've learnt all sorts of things.
But i guess we can only be friends,
still, my love for you won't end.
I'm actually in that situation right now and this poem explains the feelings very well!
Keep up the good work!
-
Thanks
-
The pangs of first love...well written dear one.
Adding your comment:
1 - 18 of 18
