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A lifetime Together

There can be wisdom in youth
A spirit blessed with a moment of truth.
A life so infinite,ageless,beyond compare.
Close together I find us standing here.
So proud
humble confidence displayed.
Behold -
Such great love and dignity.
With a youthful spirit so strong and brave
At the end of life there was much which he gave
For our precious world he did save.

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 5, 2008

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    Simply beautiful! I really enjoyed the soft quality to this piece, but such a strong message.
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene


    • LadyJane13
      November 10, 2008
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      Thanks so much for the lovely comment and me winning Honorable mention

      Jane