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Bullies

                            People tease me,
                          Know why, People do
                      It's so unfair didn't you know,
                    They    tease me about    dandruff
                    Why      don't they pick    on other,
                    pe-      ople, I mean it  must mean
                    that    they are jealouse  I hate my
                    life!!!!! PICK ON OTHER PEOPLE WOULD
                    MEAN MORE STRESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                    I CAN'T BE THAT CRUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                      I WILL DEFINATELY TAKE MATTERS IN
                        TO MY OWN, OWN, OWN, OWN HANDS.
                        NOW I HAVE FINISHED I WILL BE
                          AS HAPPY AS CAN BE. I'LL
                            TEACH THOSE BULLIES
                                  SOME DAY

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This is true!!! Please do not disrespect the power of the bullies

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    November 3, 2008
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    Wow this is quite a vent of emotion! I always wonder; do the parents of kids who bully teach their kids to bully people or do they just stay away and teach their kids nothing? I don't know what to say except try to make the most out of your life. Keep releasing your feelings through your writing; it's very helpful and so important.
    Brian


  • Candy6
    November 3, 2008
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    Bullies are fuckin idiot