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Bullies

                            People tease me,
                          Know why, People do
                      It's so unfair didn't you know,
                    They    tease me about    dandruff
                    Why      don't they pick    on other,
                    pe-      ople, I mean it  must mean
                    that    they are jealouse  I hate my
                    life!!!!! PICK ON OTHER PEOPLE WOULD
                    MEAN MORE STRESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                    I CAN'T BE THAT CRUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                      I WILL DEFINATELY TAKE MATTERS IN
                        TO MY OWN, OWN, OWN, OWN HANDS.
                        NOW I HAVE FINISHED I WILL BE
                          AS HAPPY AS CAN BE. I'LL
                            TEACH THOSE BULLIES
                                  SOME DAY

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This is true!!! Please do not disrespect the power of the bullies

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  • Sparrow
    November 13, 2008
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    TELL THE TEACHERS GET EVERYBODY TO HATE THEM

  • Sparrow
    November 13, 2008
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    Go gettem girl


  • AnnD Moderators member
    November 3, 2008

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    Sometimes standing up to a bully is all it tkes to make them stop. No one should ever have to suffer at the hands of a bully and one day they will learn that they cant get through life being like that.
    Well written.


  • iguana54
    November 3, 2008
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    bully da bullies

    give em a taste of their own medicine


  • iguana54
    November 3, 2008
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    cool

    i got bullied tons at primary skool, so one day i turned round and got my own back


  • noiseandkisses
    November 3, 2008

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    You tell them!

    I hate bullies too!
    They're not cool at all.
    It will all get better soon enough.
    I feel the pain in this piece.
    Good Work.
    <3

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