PSADED,
the shout that echos through the valley,
the green valley,
my old and favorite home,
the place where where green grew like trees,
the home of the slackers,
we unrefined heathens,
united by our friend MARY,
the place where it seldom ran dry,
so join us in our shout,
poke smot all day every day my friends,
we laugh and joke,
and roll and smoke,
and start the fun all over again.
Author notes
yep based on home,
and the good old days,
before i went to collage,
doesn't matter if it wins or not, its a piece of home.
A contest entry
- i have exactly 420 comments by Deathless1.
650 points, ended November 4, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice i agree psaded well said. nice to e a stoner....too bad u went to college??? i d k i need my weed u are one strong person to give that up for school.
lissa baby 420
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nice one M.
ya know wats funni, im wearin my VCS PSADED beater shirt today makes me happi, in the same way this poem does for you.. reminders of home and all the good shit we did.
PSADED says VCS XxTwigxX
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i love this piece of home, it is fun and lovely in every way.
you have a few thing that need corrected but i don't judge on that so don't worry.
great write
thanks for entering.
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