A lot of Rum was flowing that night
the girls even throw their dress off as they were
diving into pool to cool off, God knows the Rum makes you Hot
A lot of Rum and A Lot of cocks,
when you put in the AA batteries to make them go OOOOOOOOO AHHHHHHH
man that feels sooooooo gooooooooooooood sisssssssss
what a sham morning came along with the cops,
for the Girls were only seventeen
A lot of Rum was flowing that night
Author notes
just have fun and be the drinking age tats allllll
A contest entry
- Intoxicated by Hell In Harmony.
3500 points, ended November 18, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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Wow I really love this poem it's a big reality check for those who are way out of controll not just minors.
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relateable intro.
what a sham morning came along with the cops,
for the Girls were only seventeen
reaility check-cool.
thanks for this and goodluck
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