Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

friendship

As we gaze at each other, am lost in bewilderment and awe
Your gaze an entry into enchanted magnificence
Your voice an echo of angelic splendor,
Bringing a fragrance from the intensity of your soul
Sweetening all sourness inside of me,
Evening all jagged edges of my being.

As we turn to behold the moonless sky
With our fingers and souls entwined
Wondering what could have been…
A star shoots by; leaving me wishing you could be mine;
But my heart doesn’t dismay or whine
Because at the same table of friendship forever shall we dine.

please give detailed comments,not the ones "one-liners" you yourself would frown at....shalom

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)