The color of sky
with a dullness of love's longing,
to melt my heart's coldness
frozen within grips of griefs.
An essence to satiate desire
in strangeness of graceful
taste of kisses
in reflection of your eyes,
left although over time
to pose a memory
which killed my tears,
may be much more.
Now nestled next to my window
speaking towards an aurora of blue moon,
asking for tomorrow's response
in the dark solitude of my soul,
a profoundness to return.
Author notes
100 words or less on the contest prompt
Behind dull blue eyes
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 15 entries less then 100 words #30 by mysticstorm.
650 points, ended November 7, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Such soft beauty in your words...loovely vocabulary and flow...I truly love the closing stanza...thank you for entering...
mystic -
I love the expression of how you speak of being nestled next to your window. You have a great way with words. You truly are a positive influence and an inspiration. Great job.
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Beautiful use of vocabulary here; wonderfully penned
Good luck in the contest
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