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Heart Rainbow



My heart rainbow between rain and sun,
infinite colors, of princes, of virgins,
wind of moods, notes blues, spilled night,
cold magical, an enigmatic lapis lazuli lunar.

In the envy of your eyes, a shade of blue,
fire your passion in red crimson with reason,
takes luster of gold, saffron, scented orange,
sometimes it's purple,when senses are in turmoil.

Green is the dress, when they're appeased;
to look as wide sea, blue, peace, loyalty,
in purity, intelligence, serenity of your pupils.











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  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    Lovely metaphor and flow...

    very creative and well done...

    xoxoxoxox

    nicely done...


    mystic