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It's Irrelevant

The depth of us lies deep within,
the body merely a vessel,
your truth and faith make you who you are
the outer casing a fleeting necessity.

For that which lies in your deepest core
is the integrity that shines through,
for soon the body shall be disgarded
as the soul shall sing in perfect tune.

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You don't have a soul. You have a body. You are a soul.
C.S. Lewis
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  • penman gold member
    February 21

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    Wonderful

    Very expressive and well done. As always such a skillful and masterful write. Thank you for sharing.

  • Bob Fox
    November 3, 2008

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    Exposed

    The body is exposed. The soul often just awaiting final release and then perhaps paradise. words to hear and live by poet. As always well done.