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God's Promise

Falling rain to drench my soul
Immensity of life
Wondrous colors to extol
Rid me now of strife

Background blues of autumn hues
Reds that streak the sky
Which color will you chose
I wait for your reply

Orange and gold blend into one
Sweet lavenders that lunge
A new day has begun
Into wonder we are plunged

Yellow of the daffodils
Purple from the night sky
Such beauty in details
How I wish that I could fly

Rainbow of God’s promise
That jets across the heavens
No more doubting Thomas
Such beauty as it deepens

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    True faith in words of inspiration...

    beautiful imagery and feel...

    xoxoxoxox


    mystic


  • Denerica
    November 5, 2008

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    Vivid

    I could feel why I cling to the icon of rainbows to remind me what is promised by Him, you made creation come alive in this...loved it, bless you.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    November 4, 2008

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    I love how you describe the rainbow in colors of nature. Beautiful images. Love the picture and background also!


  • Samplette gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    A beautiful piece of poetry. His rainbow is such a special gift to us. A good picture to go with your piece. Best wishes in the contest.
    Sam

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