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~ Snow Fu Fighting ~

We will beat the Yankee's
of that you can be sure
for the taller they are
the harder they fall

Sleeping on the job
in the middle of the night
we sneaked passed Joann
and raided their campsite

Taking the Yanks snowballs
in a white flurry we were gone
Billy Baggins and l'il legs
sang a little song

on the way back
they were as happy as could be
ready for snow fu fighting
ready to see the Yanks flee

All laid neat
within the firing line
with a count from one to ten
Wayne and Lily otv called time

Time to kick ass
for the war to start again
while all of them were sleeping
totally unprepared

We took up our positions
and in unison we threw
a million snowballs
right back at you

Hot legs was ready
a giant snowball in hand
whizzing through the air
it splattered their first in command

Who was dreaming of winning
in a blissful state
until he was woken
by a snowball in his face

He jumped up with a start
doing a nifty jig
he shouted to Joann
'How the blazes did they get in?'

We laughed so loud
we nearly caused an avalanche
SNOW FU FIGHTING
was the song we sang

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  • Swtpoetryman
    November 5, 2008

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    DREAM ON, BABY! DREAM ON!

    I think that you should read and memorize today AP quote as you are bound to lose the war - for I have an arsenal of secret and magical weapons such as the world has never seen - and in my book The King ends up on top of The Queen - nearly every time! HE! HE! The British don't run around in fear like chickens without heads - shouting THE YANKS ARE COMING - THE YANKS ARE COMING - without a good reason, Baby! HE! HE!


    "How you think when you lose determines how long it will be until you win"

    Love and Peace to you and your mates when you are ready to surrender!
    THE SNOWBALL KING & RINGLEADER of the world's COOLEST AND STRONGEST ARMY.


    • onesugar gold member
      November 5, 2008
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      Bring it on!

      Yeah yeah yeah, blah blah blah, yatta yatta yatta....LMAO!

      Now you know I will never surrender...I must look up that word
      to find out what it means


      Have you seen ya arse...nal??? it's in a very sorry state.

      Thanks for your fab comment hon....gone right over me head
      see you on the battle field. LOL!!!

      Love you ~sugar~

  • twodie4
    November 4, 2008

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    You never cease to amaze me sug...I am with you packing a snowball and lobbing at Earl. He don't half look funny doing his jig lol Wonderful write for the time of year...it is nice to remember times gone by.
    All the best hon
    Emma


    • onesugar gold member
      November 5, 2008
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      Thanks Em for your fab comment...I am so glad you enjoyed this, here's another snowball.

      ~sugar~


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    November 4, 2008

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    Wonderful Piece

    Hahahaha. Wonderful imagery Sugar. I liked the 'manic' feel to this piece, it was great. Transported me to the snow alright, and the snowball fight. Hehehee. Well done Sugar, wonderful piece.

    Darkest Love
    Wayne Leon
    xx

    • onesugar gold member
      November 4, 2008
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      LMAO! hehehehehehe, Glad you enjoyed baby.
      I hope your aim is good gonna need all the back up we can get.
      It is great to see you here. Value and appreciate you reading and commenting
      always a pleasure.
      Darkest Love
      Chelle xx


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    creative sug as i look on all our history in writing we have come such a long way and we both put away our other naughty girl costumes and brought out another side in our writing i like this it was joyful reading it

    • onesugar gold member
      November 3, 2008
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      Blame Earl LOL!!! He threw the first snowball. I was thinking the same thing the other day, how our writing has changed...Our naughty girls costumes are in storage for awhile
      Appreciate you reading hon
      ~sugar~


  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    LOL! This was good and gave me a chuckle this morning Thank you for this read sounds like fun I know your having it LOL!


    • onesugar gold member
      November 3, 2008
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      Wicked time so gald you enjoyed this
      Appreciate you reading
      ~sugar~


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    LOL ! I sure do aim well.. always able to handle the bigger balls.. and splat the commander down.. knocking off his crown.
    Brilliant loving this game of wars
    Julie

    • onesugar gold member
      November 3, 2008
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      We did something similar last year...that was just as crazy.

      You sure do aim well hon, I knew I could count on you

      Appreciate you reading as always
      ~sugar~


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    Oh sugar .. you gave my secret away... gotta blame the guys .. and that last drink they gave me.. it was not my fault I fell asleep. You did a great job with this... time for Earl to save the day...



    Joann


    • onesugar gold member
      November 3, 2008
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      I do blame them hon...Glad you enjoyed this
      Truly appreciated. Have a fab day.
      ~sugar~

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