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Siobhan

How I'd wear you like a diamond on my eyetooth
had I thought to adapt to your possibilities

at an earlier time in this incarnation or even
named a daughter in your honor as the ancestors

urged; orthodontists track your smiles' progress
into the next ring, hoping there will be knock-outs

and pugilists strong enough to handle whatever
mode your choice of bodily decorations take

just praying they'll forego the piercings we've learned
in this lifetime will produce scar tissue and puss.

For now, the temporary rub-ons of dollar store
fairies suffice along with oil based makeup sticks

compelled by some strange accord towards yearning
to paint your belly blue in the 21st century.

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  • Judith Chandler
    November 3, 2008

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    I'm remembering how my mother used to worry about the headband I wore in our small town, which caused a rumour that I was a "pusher" as we said then.

    I like this write and your anxiety comes through though it's also kind of amusing. Blue bellies, is that the latest trend? It washes off, right?


    • ea silver member
      November 4, 2008
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      it comes from the ancient race (Picts or Celts, not sure) painting their bodies for war.